It’s time for six sentence sunday, the weekly blog where participants post six sentences of something they’ve written. It’s a great way to discover new writers, so be sure to stop by the blog and check out the other participants!
Today’s six come from Ties of Blood, which is finally finished (yay!) and shipped off to the editor and the beta people. I thought I’d find a Jorick snippet for Sharon – who by the way is guest posting over at Love Romance Passion, so if you’re inclined stop and show her some love! :)
(working cover)
(This is after they’ve come back from seeing Malick. Initially they have a fight with Oren, and then some alone time where he finally asks her if she is all right.)
Jorick drew a deep, frustrated breath. “I’m sorry, I should have asked that first, I just…” he broke off and cleared his throat. “I’m not used to feeling helpless, anymore.”
“It’s all right, I understand.”
“It’s not much of an excuse,” he muttered. “But what’s done is done.” He rolled over to face her and cradled her cheek in the palm of his hand.
Thanks for stopping by and be sure to check out the other participants.
thejissilly
/ March 13, 2011How could you make Jorrick feel all helpless and stuff. Thats not fair.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 13, 2011It’s good for him every now and then. otherwise he gets a god complex :p
Jessica Subject
/ March 13, 2011Yes, it’s nice to see a different side of characters sometimes.
sassyspeaks
/ March 13, 2011Yes I know you almost forgot ! was gonna remind you – that Jorick really is sweet – for a vampire
Sandra Sookoo
/ March 13, 2011Oh, very nice!
Graylin Fox
/ March 13, 2011Cheek cradling is so sexy and sweet. Love it.
Sarah Grimm
/ March 13, 2011Love this side of Jorick.
Gem Sivad
/ March 13, 2011A tender tough guy.
Yep, this makes me want more.
Great six!
gem
charmaine gordon
/ March 13, 2011Sweet moment after all the turmoil. Good six and success with your story.
Sharon
/ March 13, 2011I know I say this *every time you post something with Jorick, but :sigh: he is one of my favorite vamps
Kerrianne
/ March 14, 2011‘Whats done, is done’ Very ominous!
Pippa Jay
/ March 14, 2011sweet.
Barb
/ March 14, 2011Congrats for the completed manuscript!
Will definitely have to catch up… read the other novel first… Waaah!
Artswebshow
/ March 14, 2011Congratulation in completing the book.
I have to say that cover design is pretty good.
Sometimes overly coloured covers can be a bit overwhelming
Sue
/ March 18, 2011this is your march 13 post