It’s time again for six sentence sunday, the fun blog group where participants post six sentences from something they’ve written. It’s a great way to find new writers, so be sure to check out the other participants!
I spent the last week catching up and got my website updated and some miscellaneous stuff done, though haven’t gotten to the Claudius story, so I thought what the heck, let’s do one more from Ties of Blood.
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This is a continuation from last week. Jorick and Katelina are laying on the bed in their “room” at The Guild’s citadel.
“It won’t be for long.”
“I know,” she agreed, though truthfully she didn’t. She gazed into the deep, dark pools of his eyes and felt herself sinking into their depths. As she had many times before, she let herself drown in them, like going under in a warm summer pond.
He captured her lips in a kiss, and she responded eagerly. Her lips parted for him and he swept his hot tongue into her mouth, tangling with hers and vying for supremacy.
Thanks for stopping by and remember to check out the other participants!
Have a great Sunday!
Jessica Subject
/ March 20, 2011Sounds like they’re going to have some fun while they wait.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011hee-hee, they need some fun!
katrina whittaker
/ March 20, 2011kat
kittee_cat@bigpond.com
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks Kat! Thought they could use something nice for a change!
sassyspeaks
/ March 20, 2011vying for supremacy ??
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011I bet you can guess who wins
Gem Sivad
/ March 20, 2011I could feel that kiss.
Great six!
gem
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, gem!
Sarah Grimm
/ March 20, 2011Nice! I love kiss snippets.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Sarah!
Dee Carney
/ March 20, 2011Nice six!
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Dee!
Pippa Jay
/ March 20, 2011Sweet.
charmainegordon
/ March 20, 2011Oh my. Tongue wars. How cool. . .and hot.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011heh-heh tongue wars. I like that!
Christa Paige
/ March 20, 2011Delicious kiss! I hope he does get supremacy.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011heh-heh, oh he will >:)
Kerrianne
/ March 20, 2011Hawt kiss.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Kerri Anne!
Ruth Ann Nordin
/ March 20, 2011A quickie, huh?
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011I’m voting for it – there’s a beta reader debate at the moment, though :p
Liana Brooks
/ March 20, 2011Nice.
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Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Liana!
Marie Dees
/ March 20, 2011Really nice six sentences!
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, marie
Laura Kaye
/ March 20, 2011Loved the summer pond analogy–sweet.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Laura!
Eleri Stone
/ March 20, 2011I love the ‘going under in a warm summer pond’. Sweet but almost fatalistic too.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011hee-hee, well, kissing a vampire is never completely safe
Lauri J Owen
/ March 20, 2011I get a real mixed message from this – both very good and very bad. Great six.
Joleene Naylor
/ March 22, 2011Thanks, Lauri!
thejissilly
/ March 28, 2011I cant wait until I get to that part. They spend a lot of time lying around