Six sentence Sunday is a fun blog event where authors share six sentences of something they’ve written. Be sure to check out the other participants.
Today’s six is again from my unedited WIP – which happens to be book four in the Amaranthine series.
This is another bit from Chapter 1 – Jorick, Oren and Katelina are attempting to rescue Kale from the Institute of Paranormal Sciences in Michigan and the cops have just arrived…
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A canary yellow sports car tore around the corner and only missed taking off the van’s door by inches as it slid to a stop next to them. Katelina immediately recognized the car, and the redheaded vampire who bounded out of it. It was Verchiel; the Executioner that Jorick hated.
As if to demonstrate his own vampire skills, one minute Verchiel was next to the van and the next he was practically in it, leaning over Oren with a broad, fanged grin on his face. “Making a mess are we?”
Oren’s eyes bulged. “What in the hell are you doing here?”
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Jessica Subject
/ January 22, 2012Sounds like Oren’s plans might be foiled. Great six!
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012They usually are! Thanks for stopping by!
Juli Hoffman
/ January 22, 2012Oh! Oh! Oh! So glad that Verchiel will be in this book!
I love his smart-@$$ humor!
*Side note, I was able to read your blog today, glasses off! Woo hoo! The new font you’re using is much bigger. I like your dark background against the white “boxes.” Thank you!
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012yeah, that other white one sucked, LOL! I kept trying to tweak it and finally it;s like WHY?!?! just change themes woman! duh moment!
Oh yeah. For those who want to know Verchiel will also be in book 5
I have one sentence started for it so far…. in my head…..
angela quarles
/ January 22, 2012Nice action and description!
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012Thanks, Angela!
Karysa Faire
/ January 22, 2012Wow. Scary. I’m not familiar with the series but looking forward to learning more.
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012Thanks, Karysa!
sharonstogner
/ January 23, 2012doing the happy dance for Verchiel
Miss the gang
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012I know, I just love him <3
DM
/ January 23, 2012I’m lovin it! Ange just told me how much she’s missing these characters, as am I.
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012Thanks! I need to get back to editing book four…
Barb
/ January 24, 2012wahaha! Not Oren’s favorite either!
Go, Verchiel!
I know I shouldn’t root for him, because he upsets my favorite vampire, but Jorick needs some competition!
Joleene Naylor
/ January 24, 2012I know, they both hate the poor guy
heh-heh, it’s good for Jorick. Gives him someone to focus his rage at!
thejissilly
/ January 28, 2012Canary Yellow??? A pink sports car is bolder and more impressive.
Joleene Naylor
/ January 30, 2012hahahahaah! Sadly, he’d drive a pink car….