Six sentence Sunday is a fun blog event where authors share six sentences of something they’ve written. Be sure to check out the other participants.
Today’s six is again from my unedited WIP – which happens to be book four in the Amaranthine series.
A continuation from last week’s scene:
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“Let’s call it a race, and I won. Look, there’s little Kately! How are you, not injured, I hope?”
“That’s not my name!” Since he’d overheard her mother use that name, he insisted on calling her by it.
Jorick was suddenly there, he grabbed Verchiel and spun him away, slamming him into the van, and shouted, “You!”
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Barb
/ January 29, 2012yeah, you, what are you up to?
Great six!
David Knight
/ January 29, 2012Guess Jorick is not a happy chappy Jo…Perhaps theres gonna be biting and fighting now..ha ha NICE 6
Angie
/ January 29, 2012WOOT!!! I love love love Sunday’s because of this! /bounce GREAT six, miss!
Juli Hoffman
/ January 29, 2012“Let’s call it a race, and I won.” Classic Verchiel! I his character!!!
Sue
/ January 29, 2012Okay – you’ll understand this when you read my e mail – I Jorick protecting Katleina or just angry at Verchiel?
DM
/ January 29, 2012NO!!! Don’t stop there. Ok. Pretty darn good choices. I still love Verchiel. What a character, for sure.
Jasmine
/ January 29, 2012Ooh! Tease!
Jessica Subject
/ January 29, 2012Great cliffhanger!
DeAnna Felthauser
/ January 29, 2012I loved “Let’s call it a race, and I won.” Great six!!
angela quarles
/ January 29, 2012Very powerful, lots of tension and conflict!
thejissilly
/ January 29, 2012Why does Jorick have to be so rough? Such a car slammer!
Jodi Aman
/ January 30, 2012I am intrigued to hear more!