I am going to be virtually nonexistent during October working on book 5. I’ve set my email to autoreply and, except for two days a week, I have sworn off my Facebook, Twitter, Pintrest, and even my email. If you contact me via these channels and I don’t answer immediately, that’s why.
In the meantime, please enjoy a random, unedited ADULT CONTENT snippet from Heart of the Raven:
CONTAINS SPOILERS for Ashes of Deceit. If you haven’t read that book yet, then read at your own risk.
Something about his expression made alarm bells ring in her head. “What did they say?”
Jorick met her eyes and gave her a tight smile. “I imagine the same as they said to you.” He caught her hand and traced her knuckles with his thumb. “It’s over now, and Malick is their problem.”
“Is he?” The same sick fear she’d had since the attack welled up again, like chronic heartburn. Would Jorick really stand aside and let someone else hunt down his master?
“Yes. I have more important things to worry about.” His tone turned teasing as he nuzzled her ear. “Like trying to make sure you don’t accidentally kill yourself. That takes a lot of effort.”
A sarcastic reply rose to her lips, but he drowned it with a burning kiss. She held out for a moment, just to show him she had some control, and then relented. Her body softened against his. She parted her lips to give him better access, and his tongue swept into her mouth. It tasted hot and vaguely coppery, like a sun warmed penny. She wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer, plunging his tongue deeper.
A soft moan escaped her lips and she arched into him. Her breasts flattened out against his hard chest. He tangled his fingers in her long golden hair and his other hand played up and down her side, teasing her through her clothes. Memories of Jorick’s trepidation disappeared with his touch. There was only the two of them, limbs tangled and hot tongues parrying. No one else mattered
She wanted his hands on her skin, and broke the kiss to peel off her sweater. She started to pull him to her again, but he resisted. A question hung in her eyes and was answered when he unfastened her bra. He slid the lacy straps down over her arms and threw the undergarment to the floor. Her breasts hung heavy and naked, the nipples hardening with exposure and desire and he cupped them in his smooth hands. His thumb traced invisible patterns over the firm curves, and then dropped away so his tongue could take over.
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Donna DM Yates
/ October 9, 2012You can write these so well. Loved it.
Joleene Naylor
/ October 9, 2012Thanks!
Sue
/ October 9, 2012As I’ve said you do these scenes very well.
When I took my sex scenes course I found this site and found it helpfu
http://home.epix.net/~jlferri/sexrom.html
off hand I can’t think of anyone who has been to Russia or Japon
You’re leaving your comfort zone and that can be a good thing sometimes
Joleene Naylor
/ October 9, 2012Awesome!! i was looking for this site and could not find it for the life of me! (i did come across a couple of other interesting sites including this one;
http://writersinthestorm.wordpress.com/2011/06/10/sensual-word-menu-2/
Jen g
/ October 9, 2012I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for these sneak peeks to hold us over till we can read the whole thing.
Joleene Naylor
/ October 10, 2012Glad you’re enjoying them!
Roger
/ October 9, 2012That got me all hot and bothered. It takes a special skill to write scenes like this, which is why I don’t bother since the only time I did, both of my readers fell over clutching at their sides with feverish laughter.
Joleene Naylor
/ October 10, 2012LOL! That bad, huh? It’s not so much skill as practice. Lots of practice. I used to be in an RP group and let’s just say the characters were all like rabbits, LOL!
Roger
/ October 10, 2012Demonstrating my usual lack of any real knowledge, but what does RP mean?
Joleene Naylor
/ October 10, 2012Role Play. Think fan fiction where you take turns writing scenes back and forth and you’ve got it – though some role play groups do just a sentence or two then wait for the other people to answer. We did pages, LOL!
Roger
/ October 11, 2012there are a couple of groups on shelfari that tried that. it petered out after a few days.
Joleene Naylor
/ October 12, 2012We had one that lasted for a couple of years on Yahoo Groups – the reason it was fun was the people, but it eventually turned into a stress filled, nightmare inducing hell that taught me a lot about government (i was one of the “in-charge” people) and people in general. But overall we had a lot of fun.
Roger
/ October 12, 2012I wanted to put space stations in after someone else’s love scene; or a zombie after a political statement. It didn’t work very well. Or perhaps my mind is centered on the same old subjects.
Joleene Naylor
/ October 14, 2012I dunno, I could see zombies and politics going together really well!
Sue
/ October 14, 2012they already have….
Roger
/ October 14, 2012I could name names but don’t know just how secure this site is.
Juli Hoffman
/ October 13, 2012I like this a lot, Jo! VERY nice! Smoking hot!
Joleene Naylor
/ October 14, 2012Thanks! ;D