I am in the rewriting/rereading stage of Heart of the Raven and have added some new scenes. Of course, whenever I do that bits get deleted. Most of the time it’s just a few sentences and I can work the good ones in after a fashion, but I had to cut a chunk between Micah and Katelina that just won’t fit anymore. However Micah is convinced that since he’s so clever (his words, not mine) that it’s worth sharing. We’ll see if you agree.
Micah spied Katelina suddenly and spun towards her. “Lunch! Where the fuck is that fruity prick?”
“I don’t know.”
He stormed towards her, shaking his fist. “You better not be protecting that son of a bitch after what he did to Loren!”
She was irritated enough and that did it. “Fuck you, Micah. The last time I saw him he was in Thadimus’ office trying to get his money back.”
Micah came to a stop and towered over her. “You knew he was here and didn’t fucking tell me?”
“Sorry, I had other things on my mind!”
“Maybe I should sign up to join the list of people you’re fucking so you’d remember!”
She punched him in the stomach and he flinched backwards in surprise. “I’m not fucking a list of people, you ass! And even if I was, you’d never be on it!”
He recovered with a snicker. “Of course not, Princess, I’ve got better taste.” He turned away and stormed towards the nearest building.