Six Sentence Sunday

It’s time again forSix Sentence Sunday, the cool blog group where writers post six sentences from a work in progress, a published work, or even something they are shopping around. It’s a great way to discover new writers!

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This week’s comes from my work in progress, Ties of Blood.  Since I posted part of the argument last week, I thought the result would be fun to post this week:

“Yes, Mom, this is Jorick-” she nodded from one to the other, “-and Jorick, Mom.”“It’s a pleasure,” Jorick responded politely, his full lips concealing his long vampire teeth. “I’ve heard a great deal about you.”

Her mother surveyed him critically. “I wish I could say the same for you.” She moved towards him, her expression almost hostile.  “I suppose you’re one of Patrick’s friends, aren’t you?

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  1. So Jorick was made to meet the mother… She sounds extremely critical. Wonder what will happen next.

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  2. Interesting conflict. I don’t think I’ve read a book where the heroine introduces the vampire boyfriend to her mother. lol

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  3. Oh, lol, but what does the mother say when she sees the teeth?

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  4. Sarah Grimm

     /  February 6, 2011

    Love this! Does she have a clue what he really is?

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  5. Can’t fool Mom! lol Fun six.

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  6. Ooh, the mother is going to be on a mission or fed on. lol
    Either way it builds up nicely

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  7. Seems like he might be in for a little bit of trouble. What fun!

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  8. lol interesting and fun!

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  9. Show her your fangs! That will take some of the critical out of her!

    Bwahahahahahhahahaha

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  10. Mom’s a stitch!

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  11. Not a good Idea to insult a vampire, Mom.

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  12. Mom’s are so particular. Really fun and funny.

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  13. Mom doesn’t seem to approve of Jorick. Great 6. My only criticism would be that I counted two adverbs in these six sentences. Not that I’m anti-adverb or anything, but it did stand out.

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  14. Meeting Mom. Yikes.

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  15. OK, will definitely have to add you to the ToBuy list and check your books… if all your vampires are like Jorick, I guess I can love them all! 😀
    Good job!

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  16. I need to go back and find out who Patrick is. You have my interest:)

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  17. I like that. I’m guessing she’s introducing a boyfriend, or at least someone she’s crushing on?

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  18. lol! I wonder if she’d be quite so scathing if she knew the truth.

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  19. Poor mom. I think she’s in for a surprise.

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  20. Ahhh, everyone loves the awkward parent introductions. Great post!

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  21. Sharon

     /  February 7, 2011

    The first book when we find out how the Jorick/Patrick/Katelina thing plays out is what really made me a fan of Jorick. Hands down, one of my favorite vampire leads out there! For you guys who haven’t read it, buy it. It is so worth the read . Yeah, I’m a fangirl 😉

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  22. Meeting the parents is always rough. In this case…she’s in for a surprise. LOL

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  23. You can’t hide anything from moms, and she smells trouble. Uh oh!

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  24. Whoa! Who has the fangs? Jorick or the mom? Very cool.

    As for Katelina getting him to go…awesome! I love it when the woman’s in charge. 😛

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  25. Guess who’s coming to dinner. LOL I have to admit, Mom does seem to be this vampire’s match. 🙂

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  26. Laurel Kriegler

     /  February 10, 2011

    He gave in did he?? good boy 😉

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  27. A vampire’s worst nightmare, disapproving parents!!!

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  28. Love it!! I wouldn’t mind meeting a vampire boyfriend

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