Six Sentence Sunday

It’s time again for six sentence sunday, the fun blog group where participants post six sentences from something they’ve written. It’s a great way to find new writers, so be sure to check out the other participants!

I spent the last week catching up and got my website updated and some miscellaneous stuff done, though haven’t gotten to the Claudius story, so I thought what the heck, let’s do one more from Ties of Blood.

(working cover)

This is a continuation from last week. Jorick and Katelina are laying on the bed in their “room” at The Guild’s citadel.

“It won’t be for long.”

“I know,” she agreed, though truthfully she didn’t.  She gazed into the deep, dark pools of his eyes and felt herself sinking into their depths. As she had many times before, she let herself drown in them, like going under in a warm summer pond.

He captured her lips in a kiss, and she responded eagerly. Her lips parted for him and he swept his hot tongue into her mouth, tangling with hers and vying for supremacy.

Thanks for stopping by and remember to check out the other participants!

Have a great Sunday!

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  1. Sounds like they’re going to have some fun while they wait. 😉

  2. katrina whittaker

     /  March 20, 2011

    😛 fun for sure !!! love these sss !! such a tease !!

  3. vying for supremacy ?? 😀

  4. I could feel that kiss.

    Great six!


  5. Nice! I love kiss snippets.

  6. Nice six!

  7. Oh my. Tongue wars. How cool. . .and hot.

  8. Delicious kiss! I hope he does get supremacy.

  9. Kerrianne

     /  March 20, 2011

    Hawt kiss.

  10. A quickie, huh? 🙂

  11. Really nice six sentences!

  12. Loved the summer pond analogy–sweet.

  13. I love the ‘going under in a warm summer pond’. Sweet but almost fatalistic too.

  14. I get a real mixed message from this – both very good and very bad. Great six.

  15. I cant wait until I get to that part. They spend a lot of time lying around

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