Six Sentence Sunday

it’s time again for Six sentence Sunday, that fun blogging experience where participants post six sentences from something they are working on, something they have published or just, well, something!

Today’s six come for the short story Claudius that I have not finished. Partially because I’ve done more than 20 book covers in three weeks, and partly because I’ve lost my thread of thought on it. I need to get back to it, though.

He could see her; dark and coquettish. She batted her eyes like a virgin, but took him in the stables like a common whore. He didn’t love her, and she knew it, though she didn’t care. He was just a game for her, but that was all right with him because her offerings were sweet enough. Then, they got sweeter. She showed him her immortality and let him taste it.

Someday I will finish it.

In the meantime, be sure to check out the other participants!

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  1. katrina whittaker

     /  April 3, 2011

    🙂 only her immortality !!! tart !! loved it !!! sounds like something saucy and def inviting !! great sss
    kat
    😛 kittee_cat@bigpond.com

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  2. Great six! His voice comes through so well.

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  3. Great ! – oh WE will finish it have no fear – good teaser – I have to catch up with you one of these days

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  4. You need to finish this! Wonderful six!

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  5. Tantalizing. What I like is how well his personality comes through. 😀

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  6. And 20 covers in three weeks? Wow! You are busy!

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  7. Wow, this was fun. Took him in the stables. And then showed him her immortality. Great imagery!

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  8. Very intriguing. Great imagery.

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  9. Great six. Love the promise of things to come.

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  10. Immortallity. I hear it tastes like chicken.

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  11. Chrystallla

     /  April 3, 2011

    My, very intriguing. Are we talking vampires? Can’t wait to find out more!

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  12. Loved the description “dark and coquettish”!

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  13. I really liked that! Yes, you do need to finish that sooner rather than later.

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  14. Great ending hook, unexpected and intriguing.

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  15. Intriguing! As others have said, I, too, hope you finish this story.

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  16. Your snippet hooked me! Hope you finish this, would love to read more.

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  17. Excellent six. Thanks.

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  18. Wow. So much going on in those six sentences. Intriguing.

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  19. Like! 🙂

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  20. Awesome. I especially love that second sentence! 🙂

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