Six Sentence Sunday

Six sentence Sunday is a fun blog event where authors share six sentences of something they’ve written. Be sure to check out the other participants.

Today’s six is again from my unedited WIP – which happens to be book four in the Amaranthine series.

This is another bit from Chapter 1 – Jorick, Oren and Katelina are attempting to rescue Kale from the Institute of Paranormal Sciences in Michigan and the cops have just arrived…


A canary yellow sports car tore around the corner and only missed taking off the van’s door by inches as it slid to a stop next to them.  Katelina immediately recognized the car, and the redheaded vampire who bounded out of it.  It was Verchiel; the Executioner that Jorick hated.

As if to demonstrate his own vampire skills, one minute Verchiel was next to the van and the next he was practically in it, leaning over Oren with a broad, fanged grin on his face. “Making a mess are we?”

Oren’s eyes bulged. “What in the hell are you doing here?” 


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  1. Sounds like Oren’s plans might be foiled. Great six! 🙂

  2. Oh! Oh! Oh! So glad that Verchiel will be in this book! 🙂 I love his smart-@$$ humor!

    *Side note, I was able to read your blog today, glasses off! Woo hoo! The new font you’re using is much bigger. I like your dark background against the white “boxes.” Thank you!

    • yeah, that other white one sucked, LOL! I kept trying to tweak it and finally it;s like WHY?!?! just change themes woman! duh moment!

      Oh yeah. For those who want to know Verchiel will also be in book 5 🙂 I have one sentence started for it so far…. in my head…..

  3. Nice action and description!

  4. Wow. Scary. I’m not familiar with the series but looking forward to learning more.

  5. doing the happy dance for Verchiel 😉 Miss the gang

  6. I’m lovin it! Ange just told me how much she’s missing these characters, as am I.

  7. wahaha! Not Oren’s favorite either!
    Go, Verchiel! 😉
    I know I shouldn’t root for him, because he upsets my favorite vampire, but Jorick needs some competition! 😉

  8. Canary Yellow??? A pink sports car is bolder and more impressive.

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