#FirstLineFriday (Chapter Fifteen

FLFIt’s time for #FirstLineFriday! On Friday, authors post the first one or first two lines of a potential work, a work-in-progress, or a published work  on their blog, and title the post #FirstLineFriday (just like this). It’s  a lot of fun, so feel free to join in! You can share your link on my blog comments, or on Rami Ungar’s (the brains behind FLF).

Today’s first line comes from Chapter Fifteen of Masque of the Vampire (available for pre-order with an April 1st release date) :

The next evening, Katelina casually strolled into the larger dining room where the guests had their breakfast. Petta was in attendance, as was the vampire Jorick had pointed out as Möngkedai the night before.

Another set up line. Or pair of lines. In case you can’t tell, by now they are at the mansion and the two week long party is in full swing. Though, this line may move. After I fill in all of the “add this” sections I’ve left in fourteen, it may be too long and need cut up. I guess we’ll see.

What do you think?

What’s your first line for the week?signature for white


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  1. Mongdekai. Sounds Persian or some other form of Mesopotamian. Am I close?

  2. Good.We have to read on to discover if he’s going to be pleasant or tear out her throat.


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