The Third Synopsis

FRONT COVER smallIt usually takes me several tries to get a good synopsis, and this time is no exception. I posted the first effort on my facebook page a week ago, then a few days ago I tried a second version. After some great feedback from Loni Townsend (author and photographer, whose site you should check out!), here is the third effort:

The eighth book in the Amaranthine series plunges back into darkness, steeped in superstitions and death, where vampires are once again vicious creatures of the night.

After three months away, Katelina and Jorick return home. But, so does Sarah, Katelina’s best friend everyone thought was dead. How did she survive being tortured – and killed – by vampires?

Though Sarah’s not eager to share the details, Katelina knows it’s the kind of story that leaves scars. She almost welcomes the distraction when they’re sent to guard an exclusive vampire party – until Sarah claims she’s being stalked. Who among the ancient guests would be interested in them?

Then they find a dead child with a missing heart, just like the murders in the Heartless killings. Is the serial killer a vampire – and a guest at the party? Could it have anything to do with their stalker, or is it simply too much evil in one place? When everyone seems suspicious, it’s hard to tell who the culprit is.

I like this one much better, personally.

What do you think?

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  1. I love it! I can’t think of anything that would make it better, to be honest. Now I’m super excited to check this story out when it becomes available. I already pre-ordered it on iBooks, so I won’t forget. (One thing I love about pre-orders is that I don’t have to remember when the release date is for a book.)

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