#FirstLineFriday (Chapter Twenty-Four)

FLFIt’s time for #FirstLineFriday! On Friday, authors post the first one or first two lines of a potential work, a work-in-progress, or a published work  on their blog, and title the post #FirstLineFriday (just like this). It’s  a lot of fun, so feel free to join in! You can share your link on my blog comments, or on Rami Ungar’s (the brains behind FLF).

Today’s first line comes from Chapter Twenty-Four of Masque of the Vampire – which is available  at all ebook retailers:

Katelina turned to the entrance as the double doors blew open in a shower of wood shards. The vampires around her gasped and spun towards the destruction, all eyes focused on the figure in the gaping doorway.

As you probably guessed, this is the opening to the final fight scene. Hurray! It also means it’s the final chapter.

What do you think? What’s your first line for the week?

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FRONT COVER smallAnd don’t forget that you can order book 8, Masque of the Vampire, from all major ebook outlets:

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2 Comments

  1. I might take out gaping, but overall pretty good.

    Reply
  2. Adan Ramie

     /  May 2, 2016

    I love “shower of wood shards.” Definitely got a mental picture that sounds amazing.

    Reply

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