#FirstLineFriday – Urian

FLFIt’s time for #FirstLineFriday! On Friday, authors post the first one or first two lines of a potential work, a work-in-progress, or a published work  on their blog, and title the post #FirstLineFriday (just like this). It’s  a lot of fun, so feel free to join in! You can share your link on my blog comments, or on Rami Ungar’s (the brains behind FLF).

Today’s first line comes from the short story Urian, part of the Thirteen Guests collection.

Urian combed his blonde hair and studied the effect in the mirror. Of medium length, it curled just before his shoulders, leaving delicate wisps that teased his ears.

What do you think? What’s your first line for the week?

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3 Comments

  1. Loni Townsend

     /  June 3, 2016

    I think I’d be going crazy because of hair tickling my ears! Nice bit of description. 🙂

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  2. He sounds slightly effeminate (not that there’s anything wrong with that).

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